Thursday, 28 March 2013

First Cut - Advert 2

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  1. James Michie4 April 2013 at 09:14

    I like this... it just needs some tightening up.

    - Again remove shot 1
    - The banana takes to long, remove 2-3 of the cuts - so it is more like the apple/orange.
    - As with all of your adds the titles at the end need to be WAY QUICKER!
    - The voice over will then need to begin earlier.

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