Hi Alice, I'm really not sure about this. The difference in fill levels is an issue and the editing/timing of the ad is very slow. The end sequence is still way too slow as well.
I think your sponsorship 2 shows more promise but that also needs work.
Hi Alice, I'm really not sure about this. The difference in fill levels is an issue and the editing/timing of the ad is very slow. The end sequence is still way too slow as well.
ReplyDeleteI think your sponsorship 2 shows more promise but that also needs work.