Okay, following on from my email, here are some notes...
- Remove the first shot. Begin with the apple. - Leave the rest as it is up to the titles - The title needs to be way faster - like WAY FASTER!!! - And the voice over will then need to come in sooner.
I think this should be re-christened sponsorship 1. For sponsorship two you should have the sequence carry on from this one beginning with the shot at 0:04, cut to a medium shot of someone picking up the glass, then cut to a medium-close up of them drinking it, then cut to a shot of them smiling at camera. Then cut to the titles again.
Let me know what you think. Your Mum would be perfect for it. :-)
Okay, following on from my email, here are some notes...
ReplyDelete- Remove the first shot. Begin with the apple.
- Leave the rest as it is up to the titles
- The title needs to be way faster - like WAY FASTER!!!
- And the voice over will then need to come in sooner.
I think this should be re-christened sponsorship 1. For sponsorship two you should have the sequence carry on from this one beginning with the shot at 0:04, cut to a medium shot of someone picking up the glass, then cut to a medium-close up of them drinking it, then cut to a shot of them smiling at camera. Then cut to the titles again.
Let me know what you think. Your Mum would be perfect for it. :-)